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忧离浅忆 发表于 2021-4-2 12:03:17

温月松原创作品……《春天》《香烟》《哥哥姐姐》

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忧离浅忆 发表于 2021-4-2 12:13:31

更证……《哥哥姐姐》第三句第二字，

原稿是这样的

《哥哥姐姐》

我有哥姐我骄傲，
放肆撒娇无理闹。
爱似父母常修理，
相伴一生互关照。

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